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There will be times when you pay dearly for what you love.
We had been warned, and remained stubborn. So convinced the script would shine and the storyboard would leap right off its mounting. To us, the opening scenes with the musical box and the magical house had held a world of significance. To them it had been 8 seconds of artistic wankery.
Hopes dampened but not dead, he walked the grey concrete length from our client's office to his car, cradling the golden vision of carved gilt edges and tinkling music close to his heart. There was to be a way somehow. His sensitive, stubborn nature would see to it that the tiny silver bells we heard on one inspired afternoon would be heard by a million others.
I could see it in the determined hunch of his shoulders and the deliberate pace of my steps. The silver ballerina must dance, and keep dancing.
The dream of the music box must not die.
I wished with all my might to hold his anxious arm for the length of that brief endless walk. Instead I smiled and waved, saying I'll see you tomorrow.
He never waves back.
* * *
A mellowing dusk paints the air with muted shades as I come to a regular watering hole. Called Blue Paradise, the bistro is decked in shades of Mediterranean cool with warm splashes of amber. The fatigued calm I usually end the day with is decidedly absent; I am ruffled for no good reason. Perhaps I just need a beer. I exhale antsily and push the door open.
Light laughter brushes my ear like a breeze. An exiting couple sweeps past me – and I stop. In the evening light, too bright still for tricks of the dark, her naked shoulders gleam a pure silver.
She turns briefly to look over her shoulder, and now I can see her dainty profile. A Madonna's mouth; a queenly forehead and nose, all sculpted in the same gleaming substance. The dress flares out in a stiff quaint petticoat. And beneath it, peeking out like a miracle, are slim silver legs on en pointe beribboned shoes.
(Dance for me. Once more before you die)
The sun sets; night imbues her with the life of dreams. Our dreams. She turns back to her lover and laughs again. From her lips emerge the sound of tiny, tinkling bells....
We had been warned, and remained stubborn. So convinced the script would shine and the storyboard would leap right off its mounting. To us, the opening scenes with the musical box and the magical house had held a world of significance. To them it had been 8 seconds of artistic wankery.
Hopes dampened but not dead, he walked the grey concrete length from our client's office to his car, cradling the golden vision of carved gilt edges and tinkling music close to his heart. There was to be a way somehow. His sensitive, stubborn nature would see to it that the tiny silver bells we heard on one inspired afternoon would be heard by a million others.
I could see it in the determined hunch of his shoulders and the deliberate pace of my steps. The silver ballerina must dance, and keep dancing.
The dream of the music box must not die.
I wished with all my might to hold his anxious arm for the length of that brief endless walk. Instead I smiled and waved, saying I'll see you tomorrow.
He never waves back.
* * *
A mellowing dusk paints the air with muted shades as I come to a regular watering hole. Called Blue Paradise, the bistro is decked in shades of Mediterranean cool with warm splashes of amber. The fatigued calm I usually end the day with is decidedly absent; I am ruffled for no good reason. Perhaps I just need a beer. I exhale antsily and push the door open.
Light laughter brushes my ear like a breeze. An exiting couple sweeps past me – and I stop. In the evening light, too bright still for tricks of the dark, her naked shoulders gleam a pure silver.
She turns briefly to look over her shoulder, and now I can see her dainty profile. A Madonna's mouth; a queenly forehead and nose, all sculpted in the same gleaming substance. The dress flares out in a stiff quaint petticoat. And beneath it, peeking out like a miracle, are slim silver legs on en pointe beribboned shoes.
(Dance for me. Once more before you die)
The sun sets; night imbues her with the life of dreams. Our dreams. She turns back to her lover and laughs again. From her lips emerge the sound of tiny, tinkling bells....
Literature
A Dream
I watched as they walked him forward so I could say goodbye. He was wearing just a loose long-sleeved shirt, and the blue looked beautiful with his hair. I had always loved gingers. He stood so tall. How could he stand with so much weight on his shoulders? When Willem reached me, I stood on my toes to kiss him. He pulled away slightly.
"No. I don't want to make this harder for you."
"Please Willem, for me." He bent down and kissed me gently. "I would have married you," I whispered so the guards wouldn't hear. I wanted this moment to be between me and Willem and no one else. He looked in my eyes one last time, and they led him away with the
Literature
Your Eyes
Your eyes..oh, your eyes,
They're a trap.
I knew they'd catch me,
I knew what was behind that stare,
Not love,
Lust.
My eyes, they kept staring,
Seeking for something,
Something I wanted to have,
Something you couldn't give to me.
My heart, you stole it,
Give it back!
I trusted you,
You betrayed me.
Your heart..oh, your beautiful heart,
I tried to steal it.
I failed.
Your eyes, your beautiful eyes...
Don't want me.
Literature
Song against silence
we live in the long dark,
surrounded by the silent stars,
twinkling away in mindless spark,
the black is waging endless wars,
but who could allow the silence to prevail,
and think that life is to no avail,
let the dark shout it's silence,
however terrible and endless voilence,
i say the light will stream eternal,
from our small fortress in the night,
the universe is only chaotic and infernal,
but we will sing the light,
humanity for all it's evils,
is yet better than the empty,
i would prefer the cries of perils,
and the voices of depravity.
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Based on real-life experiences. This includes the pub opposite my former office, which was one of our regular watering holes.
Based on real-life experiences. This includes the pub opposite my former office, which was one of our regular watering holes.
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I love the imagery...the music box and the silver ballerina...
The process of writing a commercial...I never thought it could make such an interesting story. Must be your awesome writing. ^__^
The process of writing a commercial...I never thought it could make such an interesting story. Must be your awesome writing. ^__^