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HOUSE OF WOLVES

It made a sound like tearing paper, the lightning in the black sky. Cartoon lightning – stark and graphical and completely surreal. Or maybe his eyes were just sharp from the pain. A red, explosive pain. His lifetime of two and a half decades had been abbreviated into these last few moments: of running with a bleeding arm from a faceless man intent on burying one more bullet in his body.

It felt like a joke. April’s Fool was yesterday but everyone got a bit fuzzy about the calendar sometimes. This particular one just happened to be a psychopath with a gun. But Alain didn’t think it was a joke, because the laugh he was waiting for never came.

Through the fading rain, the grey cathedral loomed up ahead like a huge granite angel. A Romanesque monster with a hint of old French Gothic and too-modern towering oak doors. A sudden reminder of abandoned faith and burdensome testaments. Not that it mattered. As he came closer his eyes travelled to the slightly weathered golden plaque. The Church of Our Lady Of Sorrows.

Save me, lady, if you cry for me. As he climbed the first step of the stairway to the cathedral doors, the second bullet tore a hole in his back. He felt the metal brush against his bone and screamed. The dying weight that had suddenly replaced his body collapsed on the cold rain-slicked limestone.

Keep on going, he told himself. One step at a time. The assassin must have hit home: he felt a warm liquid ooze up his throat and spat out thick red droplets on the white stone. Well. Any time now. Keep going until the time comes for you to stop.

He heard the final click of the gun. He raised his eyes and for the first time saw the Madonna Addolorata peering from her pedestal above the doorway. In the thunder flash her mournful expression began to bleed white tears.

Or so the remnants of his stolen faith insisted – that the Madonna smiled sadly down upon him. The ruined believer whose voice spoke with his lips now, spitting out more blood and whispering:

“Someone save me.”

There was a bang, but it was not from a steel barrel. Alain’s fading vision saw the church doors swing open and hit the walls with a mighty thud. He heard footsteps, pitter patter lightning quick, fading into the night. His assassin was gone.

He never saw the bishop in the doorway whose hands were too massive and callous for a cleric’s, or the young woman who stood beside him with a knowing glint in her eye. As the jet-black feeling crept over him, he felt those hands lift him up and the sharp, low female voice that said “He’ll live. He’s stronger than he knows.”

Then the night rose to meet the chainsaws of fading red-hot pain and consumed everything.

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Inspired by several things including an urban legend of a church of devil-worshipping cultists and these songs:

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:iconlukavi:
Wonderful read. You've got a touch of gloom, doom and beauty in your writing. Have you read much of Anne Rice's works? Love her, her writing, like yours is very visual-driven. And never sweet. No. No. Pretty, but with a dash of danger.

Keep doing great work, and don't lose that vision.

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In all of us there is a lawless side like
a wild beast, that peers out during sleep.
:iconcharlemaine:
Dude, don't tell me u're a Rice fan? Because I totally Am. My number one fave author. I worship the paper her prose falls on.

I dunno that it's possible for me to write or draw sweet things. because I'm not sweet. Smtimes i wish i was becoz being sweet has its advantages, but ...well, I ain't.

And I find the macabre beautiful. Occasionally I also find the beautiful macabre. (like flowers. big bunches of flowers make me think of stuffy funeral parlors. i think u can guess i wouldn't take too kindly to being given a bouquet for Valentine's.)

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconradiosaturday:
This is awesome. You've got such a style -- a little manga-inflected, but not like all the others out there. The main character's face in the lower left-hand corner is just beautiful.

You might try practicing some inking, but this is seriously amazing. I love it.

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Who is that on the other side of you?
:iconladydove7:
ohh this has my interest. I love your sense of style and atmosphere and of course I am intrigued by the mention of angel spawn?

I look forward to seeing more:)

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"The love of beauty is but the soul's remembrance of what it once knew before it was encased in flesh."
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:iconcharlemaine:
i have done ink works before (u can browse my gallery to see). pencil is definitely my stronger medium, tho i highly enjoy both. thought i'd try pencilling a little story strip like this. usually with pencil drawings u hv to be careful not to hv ur outlines too heavy, but for this i could lay it on pretty liberally... :D i tend to overdo things like that

and i really cannot do manga -- or the usual definition of manga anyways. i tried. lol... the faces come out horridly skewered

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconcharlemaine:
"I look forward to seeing more"

damn someone actually asked for more...i hv less xcuse to be lazy now XD

i have to figure out the rest of the story first, haha! it started out as just a oneshot like this. then came the backstory, then the thing about angel-spawn (literally human beings with superhuman/divine traces in their genes). Someone wants to eliminate these people. I'm not sure why. and saving this Alain from persecution is a cult/church of 'sinners' called ..dahdum...the House of Wolves. (who are not all that bad, but not all that good either.)

these things often make themselves, & i just write them as they come along.

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconladydove7:
The first thing that came to mind for me is the Nephilim, half angel children of the Philistines. The great flood predicted in the story of Noah was meant to wipe these 'giants of men' from the face of the earth. It might be inspirational for you to study them and see if that spurs any plot twists?

I'm sure it will work itself out. Inspiration has a way of popping up when you least expect it:)

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"The love of beauty is but the soul's remembrance of what it once knew before it was encased in flesh."
| My Etsy | My Website |
:iconcharlemaine:
of course i know the Nephilim. =) i have this pretty fascinating book called 'From The Ashes Of Angels' written by Andrew Collins that traces the actual existence of 'giants among men' who were allegedly responsible for guiding the construction of Stonehenge, Egypt's famous obelisks & even the great Sphinx (which is supposedly based on advanced solar calculations nonexistent in that era). with illustrations & artworks from ancient civilisations to prove it.

i discovered this gem in a jumble sale at the SPCA. u never know what lies among those dusty piles of crappy romance novels that are prevalent at every single book sale ive ever been to.

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconladydove7:
Aah that does sound pretty cool! The end all, be all source for angel info is the book A Dictionary of Angels by Gustav Davidson. It's a really great source listing variations of the names as well as any tidbits of info listed in various books, grimorums, and other such sources, all with scholastic references. It's good stuff! I can just pick up that book and look on any page for inspiration.

There's also a table of angelic script and spells in the back just as an added point of interest.

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"The love of beauty is but the soul's remembrance of what it once knew before it was encased in flesh."
| My Etsy | My Website |

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